This is the manuscript I made for the book. I got it back with some suggestions of how I could improve my book. A few of the idea for the book were a bit confusing and needed to be cleared up. The beginning of the boom where the child and the dog meet is not clear, why don't they know each other? I am going to start working on my page layouts for this book working towards a 32 page book layout. I want to make the pages for the book double page spreads so will have to think about how the characters are arranged over both sides of the page and remember not to put any important objects directly in the centre of the illustration. Making mock ups of my pages will help me to get a better idea of how the images work as spreads.
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